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Post by viraDECTHIS on Mar 14, 2010 23:34:16 GMT -5
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Post by chicapony on Mar 15, 2010 0:42:05 GMT -5
I say the first one :3
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Post by Moony{{ on Mar 15, 2010 18:04:30 GMT -5
If you're going for dark and mysterious, the first one.
I say the first one is better.
my bf says the second one. =D
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Post by omg it's COHEED?! on Mar 15, 2010 22:03:38 GMT -5
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Irony seeped into mental crevices upon the mascu’s appearance though the bitch proffered no exterior acknowledgement of his presence. His encroachment provoked a derisive engagement of the bruja’s and mascu’s gaze, yet he seemed intent on playing the ignorant charmer. Thus Vira erected herself dominantly and caudal appendage curled across her spine just as it had done with the snake. She viewed her opponent as just another vile serpent with despicable intentions; well aware that had her scent not been so fruitful the male would not be courting her. His very presence was antagonizing enough while his aloof attitude worsened her temper. The wench made no attempt at hiding these opinions and ideas which seemed to dance playfully and harshly amongst an already ominous expression. Hackles were barely raised but still made an impression and lips trembled in a grotesque manner to further display discontentment. Auditory sensors minutely twitched to the brute’s remark and introduction, but proved to be unfaithful in soothing her.
I care not for the time of day or your name.
Own vocals came out smooth and feminine which posed as a harsh contrast against her masculine features. Her tenor was well within the measurements of being considered cold and off-hand though, which may or may not provoke the brute as if her posture had not already. Viradecthis was without concern when it came to Anubis' thoughts and feelings or even impression of her. Harlot merely snapped derisively in the direction of his elongated muzzle though refused to retreat for the sake of her own pride and not swelling the males. Vira had been content for only a few minutes before she was intruded upon once more, and through experience she knew that Anubis would not be as easy to defeat as her before opponent. Oddly she appeared far less aggressive to the wolf yet more extreme in her temperament. The male’s presence was far less tolerable than a venomous snake which any spectator would find peculiar, if not insane. Yet on her side was, in fact, her impending heat. Females were not welcoming of lusty romancers until the middle of the estrus and that was only after long periods of affection, courtship and convincing. Vira would endure none of it and fight off any brute long after she became fertile and her body strived for sex. Her motivation was not the sanctity of her virginity or waiting for the prince charming that would never come. She just had no desire for pups or the possibility of an eternal relationship. The position was so male dominating and while she knew she would have control over the male the next few weeks should she consent, the idea was not bribery enough.
Though having nothing more to say and nothing more to do than put effort into low growls and an authoritative stance, Viradecthis remained stiff and holding a firm affection to holding her ground. She took one step towards Anubis in warning, taking into consideration that he probably would not back down. Hazel eyes kept his gaze even as he looked towards the firmament or his surroundings. This way he would have no choice but to make eye contact and thus see the full display of her displeasure. Muscles were tensed as well, anticipating an aggressive reaction from the male and eagerly awaiting his advance. Anubis would be able to view the expectancy even amongst the threatening antics and superior posture, thus the fae was content to wait for what followed.
character; viradecthis word count; 583 writer's mood; grumpy post status; incomplete
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